Humedal Van der Hammen
Mateo Ramirez
Carlos Martinez
The humedal Van Der Hammen is one piece of land into Bogota city that gives blessing to all the people in Bogota, because the humedal acomplish the funtion the stock up the water of the sabana of Bogota. The new mayor Enrique Peñalosa in his plan of goberment doesn't have think protect the humedal, for the contrary he plan is pave the humedal without important the concequence of this acts. yes we permited this acts the sabana of Bogota undergo change that a future can lament, because the poblations near go on flooding and the peolple go to the center of bogota, and crowded that genere chaos in the city.
Morally this is very bad, beacuse all the people have perogative to the live justly, duty save this humedal for that people deserve an live based on the justice follow the humans perogative and this is important in all countrys in the world and most important in Colombia, an country that "respect" the perogative. Also is important stand out the animals that live in this humedal that be threaten for the mayoralty of Enrique Peñalosa.
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