In schools, in the society, in college even in the family it happens. They get used to do cyber-bullying amd this made the victims start to felling bad with themselves and in some cases they commit suicide. This problem is very common in the teenagers, and the social media influence in this letting those problems happen
This is an actual subjet wich all of us see, but we are indifferent and we don't care anything about the people around us
Cyber-bulling
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s5pWLnum-_w
In this case we can see how the cyber bulling affects the people and how the social media contributes to the girl comes to suicide and finish with her life.
I think the end of the younger problem is the parents pay atention with they soons, and begins to be carefull with the childs share in the social medias, those little details that say too much
Ana Maria Rodriguez
Sofia Rodriguez
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Hello girls! I have to tell you that you did a great job in your text, related to the last work you did.
ResponderEliminarOf course there are many mistakes; the first mistake is that in your text, you didn`t describe what "bullying" is, so you started writing about something that the reader couldn`t have known.
I have to tell you that your text doesn`t have a structure, you know (first you tell a thesis, then arguments, and finally a conclussion) because I can`t know what do you want with this text (describe, critize, inform) a this have to be the first step that you have to do when you are going to write something.
Girls!! your text is so so short!! And I know that you could do a longer text but you distract with everything!
Remember that you have to focus on your text, work or whatever you are doing.
You used images and videos and they are ok! but, like the text they don`t have a structure, they can`t be put to refill blank spaces.
Ok Girls, I know that you are going to do a better work the next time, but remember that you have to get into focus! because if you don`t do that you won`t do a good job.
Greetings!
Aneth.
everiyhing it's awesome. great job!
ResponderEliminarlier!
EliminarAneth.