Instituto Pedagogico Nacional
Angie Daniela Mora
Maria Alejandra Montaña
Enviromental Pollution
This hapens when several other harmful gases (chemical, biological,physical)alten the enviroment in which we live, this is produced by the action of man and this is the main culprit for the pollution of
rivers, seas, air, land for commercials agreicultural or industrial actvities.
When and enviroment is contaminated it is because the features change and affect the healt of living beings and the avality of natural recurces.
Examples of environmental pollution :
We have taken care of polluting the environmental almost entirely.
we have polluted the water incorporating therein foreing matter such as microorganisms, chemicals, industrial waste and other sources of waste water, the problem is that these materials deteriorate water quality and make it useless for their respective uses.
the floor incorporating foreign malter such as trash, toxic waste, chemo products and industrial wastes, soil pollution we cause to the physical,chemical and biological imbalance that directly affects plants, animals and humans.
the air through the addition of harmfultoxic gases such as CO2 into the atmosphere, gases that affect the normal development of plants, animals and negatively affect the health of humans.
Opinion Angie:
as an opinion one way to avoid this serious pollution awareness and recicle, use public transport to avoid pollution such as bicycle or electric cars to improve the avality of natural resources and the healt of aurselves.
Opinion Alejandra:
Enviromental pollution, in my opinion is specifically caused by uncontrolled consumption generated by our economic system, capitalism, is a problem of great concern to the world population, which perform variety of campaigns intended to sensitize people of the importance of protecting the enviroment pollution using methods such as recycling and conscious consumption markets, environmental pollution directly affects our quality of life to such an extent that we will end our existence and that is why a problem we should not eradicate because i think it's something complicated if not impossible,if not decrease through the varity of campaigns that are being prpposed today.
I think there is a major problem here, through the whole text: coherence. In the general explanation part, there are sentences that doesn't have conection, or the exposed idea seems to not have logic development, as well as in the opinion part. So,it is so difficult to the reader get the point of view you want to show. The next time, you must organize your writtings properly, creating an initial sketch. The theme is good and interesting, and I can see a little bit of progression sice the last blog (you write more, you use more tools, you put down opinions, etc.). It's a great work, but you HAVE to improve.
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