juan felipe vargas
andres sandoval
1101
the bronx
The bronks is a place located in down town bogota,
this sector is very popular because there are a lot of crime, sale of nacotic
and there live vagabonds. Years ago the mayor had tried to exict the Bronx and
destroyed, but the mayor has not yet been. This year looks like the mayor made
it he decide at avict people of Bronx but he don’t though the rejection of this
acts, and know this people expanding around in the city and the community is
protesting for this because this people are consuming and doing your needs and
they harm to the community on special
kids because this persons are incited consumed this drogs.
Hello Guys!
ResponderEliminarI have to tell you that I didn`t like your job. I am very disappointed about that.
You have to correct many things. You ALWAYS start a sentence with capital letters, It is a rule.
Reading this text it looks like it was made in ten minutes before leave the classroom; even you didn`t look over the mistakes in the vocabulary (like : "bronks", "drogs". And of course, your text was so short.
You have to focus on your job. I can`t believe that you have made better texts in the past.
-Aneth.
Oh! I forgot something!. You have to base your ideas in a document. It has to be an opinion about that document or link.
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