martes, 23 de agosto de 2016

Andres Wilches Miguel Arboleda 1101

Does it make sense to talk today about tolerance?

If we have to talk about the tolerance, first we have to talk about its origin, but we have to say that the tolerance is the first fundamental right, but before, it was called the religious freedom of conscience, in that age (B.C) the people that respects the beliefs of the others was a person that tolerates, with the pass of the years, this person will be called tolerant.
Nowadays (since 19748) the tolerance plays different roles depending on the type of society in question.
If we talk about Bogota, the people is not much tolerant with the people that is around them, if we want to talk about the tolerance that is in this city, we have to sor out  the people that live here, because in this city lives different kind of people, for example there are "Ñeros" (vulgar and without education people), drivers from the public transport, people that works honestly, old people, and people that follows different urban cultures or religions.
If we have to highlight the most intolerant people, i'll say that the drivers from the public transport, the religious people and the egocentric people in bogota are the most intolerant persons, you cannot talk to them, and argue with them, most of them are stubbron, inclusive in most of the cases, its imposible to say your opinion against them.
And the most tolerant people, are the old people, and the people that works selling in the streets or the people that is poor, maybe it's because they dont want to lose their time or, they are very pacific.
But we are just generalazing, most of the people are intolerant in this country, but, for us, the described people are the most intolerant/tolerant kind of people.



1 comentario:

  1. Greeeeeeeeeeeeaaat. This is a good one. Your grammar is good, you use a significant quantity of vocabulary and you try to describe your opinion in a good way. However, there are some mistakes in some parts, related with the punctuation marks: it's important to take in count how to create sentences and paragraphs correctly. Also, I'd suggest you to write the next one on a more objetive point of view, I mean, without portraying prejudices or categorizing groups of persons with superficial values, which can`t be demonstrated.
    You have advanced, and I know you have potential.

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