Every four years in the world almost all the countries take place in the Olimpic Games, (T)this year it is celebrated in Rio, Brazil, and it will be the first city from Latin America to host the games. It will be since fifth to twenty first August 2016.
This time countries like Kosovo and South Sudan will be there for first time in history.
It has been filtering some ideas about the recent attacks aroun(d) the world and that it has been happening in cities like Paris where is been (was) the France Tour, or in Turkey this year in the moment when there was a gymnastic champion, also in Munich last week there was an attack. So the attacks has been occuring in places with a lot of people concentration for sporting events.
Knowing these, people is afraid for (of) a new attack in Rio because the games are a really very important event for the entire world and it host like more than 10.500 athletes from all those countries and is worried (it's worrying) the security of them and of (from)all the spectators.
DIEGO PARDO
ELISA TRIVIÑO
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Hi guys!
ResponderEliminarSo, the subject is interesting and you did a good job with the grammar part (except for a few mistakes). The only suggestion is being careful with the composition in general (like the excess of "and").
Hi guys!
ResponderEliminarSo, the subject is interesting and you did a good job with the grammar part (except for a few mistakes). The only suggestion is being careful with the composition in general (like the excess of "and").