Homeless
The homeless people in Bogota D.C. were occupied (in they mostly) the denominated zone Bronx.
This community increased the double of the homeless people in the last nine years in Bogota D.C. the prinicipal reason of this increasing is the drug problem. For this reason the police decided to make a strategy in the most important drug market in the country THE BRONX.
The facility of the commerce and entry of the drugs in this place was call the atention of the mayor and the police take drastic measures for end this drug market and narcotrafic generated for the ilegals organizations in the bronx. Until two years ago they were concentrated in the center, in areas widely recognized as the Bronx and five holes. But intervention plans, contrary to a positive effect, caused a shift to other locations. It is estimated that there are nearly 3,000 cambuches, located in places like Puente Aranda, Kennedy and Martyrs.
links: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Kr8odZ9vsqk https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8-4-93UO1KY https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FLrObhSjsOY DanielKassner David Rodriguez
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