martes, 26 de julio de 2016

INSTITUTO PEDAGÓGICO NACIONAL
ANDRES FELIPE SANDOVAL JUAN FELIPE VARGAS
peace  progress 


In Colombia the conflict began in the 1960s when armed groups were created.
In Colombia the conflict has always existed for a reason(:) war control of the territories, which has caused the innocent(s) pay the piper.
The conflict in Colombia has caused poverty, chaos, various attacks, displaced etc.
In Colombia it held a peace process with the "FARC", a guerrilla (paramilitary) group that has terrorized Colombia for decades but by signing the peace process (which finally occurred on June 20, 2016) achieving (it's achieved) a truce with the group FARC(.) but what about the different groups that are missing in Colombia? What about the ELN? Does the conflict in Colombia was (will be)  over someday?
Many experts believe that Colombia is (making) a serious mistake because they confuse peace with stillness, which is (that) Colombia(ns) believes peace is only a delay of the war that really struck
Colombia and the world


according to this sentence in english "to have peace there must be war firts (first)", the entences (sentence) is true because the peace meaning  of (is) build on ruins.

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  1. Guys, your text was good speaking of composition, grammar, subject and spelling. Of course you made some mistakes but it's part of the process.

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