CRISTHIAN CAMILO RODRIGUEZ MARTINEZ
ASTRID YURANY DIAZ VARGAS
1101 SOCIALES
THE PROBLEM OF THE AMBULANCES IN BOGOTÁ
This problem has been reported by the Secretary the Health the Bogotá from the 2008 but importance has not been placed. The contract is being suspended an irregular way. The ambulances is low quiality, in adittion the ambulances news is parked in garages, the persons call the emergency thelephone (123) and the ambulance he delays more than tree hours for the on EMERGENCY, this problem is wath the service borrowed is down. This problem has been the government of Lucho Grazon, in the moment the ambulances they are without equipements healthy. The pobation need the service of ambulance and the answer the mayor Peñalosa is "This happens in any side..." this answer is down for the mayor studied in Paris his supposed doctorate of citizenship.
This video is the problem of the ambulance in Bogota:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SewKp4yAXY0
This video is the problem of the ambulance in Bogota:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SewKp4yAXY0
Hello guys!
ResponderEliminarFirst I have to tell you some things about your text. You have to make a thesis and inform with arguments the problem telling what is the specific problem! then you have to write about the history of this problem. Use the correct use of the verbal tenses, for example "ambulances ARE", and remember that there are words like "people" to say persons and pobation (which is population). Your text is so short! but I know that you are going to do a better job the next time. Remember to follow our advices in class because I remember to told you about this mistakes.
Try to change your topics in your texts. I know that you (specially Cristhian) hate Peñalosa and love Petro, but you have to try to write things (if you want to critize) with arguments and if you don`t have them try to be more objectives.
Aneth.