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The poverty
This problem is very common in many parts of the world, even in developed countries as it is united states, China, Germany and others, this problem usually occurs by the inequity of government to the people, and also because many people do not have the money to start their studies or university degree, in Colombia this problem has been tried to solve by many governments but has not yet been able to realize. Some governments like Peñalosa tried to go against social cleansing, because they thought it was too cruel, so the way to break the poverty is education which is another problem which will be discussed later.
Poverty by Karl Marx
Marx said "The working class has nothing to lose but their chains; has, on the contrary, a world to win"
The Poverty is a disease to be cured, must be treated with the right drugs and not fooled by fake medicines, you must be respected the right to a home, education and even the right to life. Children are suffering the most. Help us to end poverty.
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