INSTITUTO PEDAGOGICO NACIONAL
EMILIO FERNANDEZ
NICOLAS GUALDRON
1101
THE CULTURE IN BOGOTÀ
In Bogota, we have a lot of things like politic, the law, the government, and other things, one of that as the culture, the culture was the principal cualities of the society, not only the cualities, also the history of a lot events, they mark the society and the persons, and the culture help us to get a better way of life, we need a culture to desarrollate our city and society, in this thing, we have problems, because we don't think in the others just on ourself, this aspect has the city on a big problem, because we need the culture to live with the others and stay in peace.
the culture has some elements like the tolerance, the sense of belonging, and the most important are the respect, this elements are very importants, not only for the culture, for us, for the citizens we live in the city. we love this city, but, others persons don't, because they hurt the city with their actions, the thieves the vandalism are everywhere, and they doesn't help the city in nothing, not only they hurt the city, the persons who don't respect the other persons, don't respect the law, the law are corrupt the police was in problems because the people don't trust on they, the people, some of they make graffitis in everywhere, in any place, they don't respect the public space and the private space, they make his own law.
all of these problems we can fix it, if we has sense of belonging, if we have more respect for the people and ourself, if the people who has the politic power wasn't corrupt, this things are very importants to fix or make our culture, we need a culture, the citizens can identificate with it, we can make the city a better place for us.
the culture has some elements like the tolerance, the sense of belonging, and the most important are the respect, this elements are very importants, not only for the culture, for us, for the citizens we live in the city. we love this city, but, others persons don't, because they hurt the city with their actions, the thieves the vandalism are everywhere, and they doesn't help the city in nothing, not only they hurt the city, the persons who don't respect the other persons, don't respect the law, the law are corrupt the police was in problems because the people don't trust on they, the people, some of they make graffitis in everywhere, in any place, they don't respect the public space and the private space, they make his own law.
all of these problems we can fix it, if we has sense of belonging, if we have more respect for the people and ourself, if the people who has the politic power wasn't corrupt, this things are very importants to fix or make our culture, we need a culture, the citizens can identificate with it, we can make the city a better place for us.
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Hello guys!
ResponderEliminarI have to tell you some things about your text. I know that this text was only made for Emilio for reasons, but in the next time I hope that you make it together.
Guys! you have to use punctuation signs and CAPITAL LETTERS! because this things could make your text amazing or awful! you decide!.
The next thing that I have to write about your text was that there wasn't a main idea in all the text. It doesn't have a thesis and any argument and without this and a structure is too difficult to read and make a text, I know that this problem exists because you talk a lot in class, so you have to make a fast work. That is not the idea for this! but I know that you are going to make a better text. I have to congratulate you, your text was longer than any other text that you have ever made, and this is an advance!
Keep doing your work!
Aneth.