Cristhian Camilo Rodriguez Martinez
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The massive consumption in Bogotà
The massive consumption is moving in the middle of a complex stage, as while the economy is slowing, the price of the dollar goes up pressing the price and the expectations in the processes of innovation are very limited.
In the last year gave a singular fact: while the economy of the country grew above 4% annual, the price of products of massive consuption analysed by the consulting Nielsen-dresser, cleanliness of the home, foods and drunk- they showed a process of slowing.
During the last months the bogotan people consume more than rest of the contry, despite inflation and strong changes in the economy, as the unstable behavior of the dollar.
In this video you can see more of consumption:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3i21my22C8I
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