Alejandro Romero
1101-2016.
Metro or better "Transmilenio" in Bogota D.C?
Since 1999 the city of Bogota was in problems (troubles), for creating a public transport (transportation) system. The studios (researches) of the metro in Bogota were designed in 1940, but it is not completed yet. Why?
The history of Bogota has (have) been very conflicting because the particular interests have been
superimposed over the intererests of (from) the city. The "mafias" in the transport of the city have destroyed or taken out other system of transport (transportation system) how (like) the "Trolebuses" that (which) were electric buses and did not produce emisions of CO2, This (Those/ These) buses were taken out for the (from) other companies of the transport traditional how (the traditional transportation) buses that work with "diesel".
The transmilenio is a system of buses with own station but this (these) buses even thoug (still) work with "diesel" and are very pollutants (polluting). The last Major "Gustavo Petro" implemented a system of electric buses in trasmilenio, but how (as) Bogota is a city with 8,000,000 citizens, It need other systems and most efficient means of transport how (transportation like) the metro that is a system of trains electrics (electric trains) did not (which don't) produce emesions (emisions) of CO2.https://youtu.be/zQcf7iYuSGs
You did a great job expressing or explaining the main idea, but both of you need to increase the use of words and learn in which order they come when they mix with others. You almost reached the quantity of words requered. Next time make the most of design tools.
ResponderEliminarThe YouTube link made a plus to the text, well done! (Next time link one in English)
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