Andres Felipe Wilches Torres
Miguel Angel Arboleda Salamanca
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The misuse of the
water is one of most important problems in the present, the water is very
important in our daily life we use it to
cook, to take a bath and most of the products that we use were made with water.
The global warming
is drying up the rivers, moors and lakes of the country, so we have to make
something about the misuse of the water for example we have to make campaigns
and expositions at least for all the people in the city to make them aware
about this important problem.
Some examples for water wasters are: doing the dishes,
washing the car, slipping through the (pool), playing with the water (ex:
pistols of water, pools, etc.), making a lot of products that needs water to be
make.
If we explain to the people how to don’t misuse the
water and we explain it to the next generations, we could make that the water don’t
dry.
We have to approach
this resource, in a future it may dry up.
Finally we leave a video about the misuse of water, and a notice:
Video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yQn8TKd1cVg
Notice: https://www.google.com.co/url?sa=t&rct=j&q=&esrc=s&source=newssearch&cd=2&cad=rja&uact=8&ved=0ahUKEwjH1Z_s047LAhUEdx4KHcbJD0AQqQIIHSgAMAE&url=http%3A%2F%2Felpilon.com.co%2Fasi-contrabandean-el-agua-de-valledupar%2F&usg=AFQjCNEE1WFxTQTi7S0CsyHS1RUSJ38a8Q&bvm=bv.114733917,d.dmo
It is a clever text, and a really important theme. There is not too much for correct really, because you build the sentences and the times correctly. Keep doing this in your next time. My only suggestion is to try to avoid the repetition of words, something that I saw in some parts.
ResponderEliminarGoood work and cheers :I