Stereotypes
In the society exists too much types of life, body, clothes and other things that affect people in the cities through these times, especially the teenagers. The make up, the clothing and personalities, this happens because with the pass of the years visions had been creating the perfect bodies for the consumption, and irrelevant things. This influenced people with wrong ideas of beauty and created problems with the security of themselves, and created frustration because they aren't like the model and don't wear with the clothes of the magazines and the girls don't make up.The childhood are affecting because the kids don't want out of play with they friends and prefer stay in home seen videos of how make up and where they can buy the clothes.
Sofia Rodriguez
Ana Maria Rodriguez
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Hello Girls!
ResponderEliminarI Have to tell you that you did a interesting job, your topic was good, and you put some images to make it better, but the text was so short! I know that you know how to write a long text in English, only remember to optimize your time.
Your text is an argument text, it is ok, but there are some words in your vocabulary that don´t are correct; for example "The Make-up"- Make up (without the article) "The clothing"- clothes, and some like that, every word has different articles for every use.
It´s better to know the real meaning of the words, because sometimes the traslator doesn´t know what you want, for example
"The childhood"- (but this is a time in our life, I think that you wanted to write The Children, or In the Childhood).
Girls! An advice: Remember that in English we cannot use the same expressions like in Spanish because they doesn´t have a real meaning! (You didn't write a real one in the text, but remember it for future texts)
You did a great job, but I hope that you are going to do a better work the next time, don´t forget to put articles and videos to reinforce your ideas!
Greetings!!
Aneth Alvarado Sarmiento