martes, 23 de febrero de 2016

Instituto Pedagògico Nacional                                                                                                23/02/2016
Emilio Fernandez
Nicolàs Gualdron
1101
English

THE BIGGEST WAR


In the 20th century, the world lived  a lot of situations, one of them is the second world war, in that moment a thousand of people died because the war with germany and the rest of europe was terrible, a lot of people was affected, in the countries lived economic issues that finish with debts in that countries, like greece, his debt is bigger also in the past year they continue with that debt.

Another action was USA launch two atomic booms to Japan, exactly to hiroshima and nagasaki, that moment was terrible, because is the reazon of a lot people died in that places, hiroshima and nagasaki was devastated, the city was a ghost, actually that places have quimic problems, because the field was really affected.

Germany has a boss, his name was adolf hitler, he was a nazis leader, the nazis killed a milions of people, the biggest part of their people was jewish, Hitler hate that people, and he began this horrible and terrible war.



Resultado de imagen para segunda guerra mundial a color

2 comentarios:

  1. Hello Guys!!
    You did a good job, but I kown that you know how to write in English but you don´t pay attention to the instructions, so you can´t optimize your time to make a better work.
    I wrote the last paragraph thinking that the text it's a bit short, because remember that you have to write more than 250 words
    I didn't understand so well the idea and the arguments of your text, because it doesn´t have a specific theme and a structure for that theme that you have to know to write a good essay (It doesn´t matter the type of text that you wrote, it must have a structure)

    Here I'm going to tell you an advice:
    Remember guys that like in Spanish you have to use CAPITAL LETTERS in the first letter of the proper nouns that you are going to use.

    I recommend you to first make a structure of the type of text that you want and then write it... and remember boys that you have to use the correct tenses for past and present, because, like in Spanish they are so diferent.

    Ok, Guys: I know that you are going to do a better work the next time! I believe in your abilities! BUT DON´T FORGET TO ORGANIZE YOUR IDEAS AND YOUR TOPICS!.

    Don´t disappoint me!
    Greetings!

    Aneth.

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