Andres felipe sandoval
Juan felipe vargas
DEMOCRACY
Democracy in bogota has been ripped off because they have mislead to the citizens.
the democracy tease of the people because it talk to them
about equiality, the equality is applied only when the people is judged the
unique way to make democracy works is the participation of the citizens. According
to Estanislao Zuleta, the democracy is splited in three parts, one of them is the equiality.
According to Marx the social classes should be eliminated.
The democracy doesn`t have moral because they don`t think in
comfort of the city but in their own interest.
in the democracy the human rights doesn`t have importance
because the citizens are considered slaves.
http://www.estanislaozuleta.com/lectura-interesante/32-democracia-y-participacion
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Alright, you wrote really good on the grammaticaly aspect of the text, and on the words' structure as well. However, you`ve got some mistakes with the punctutuation: remember always use capital letter in a sentence's beginning and put a point when you start to talking about a new subject. Also it`s important to check how to estructure what you want to say. The writting is clear and understandable, and the draw complement was nice. Good work!
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