Sandrine Molina - Cesar Pineda
The City
In the city who I live there are lots of problems, but in specific I absolutly hate that the people in this city don't apreciate the water, because we have so much and we don't realize that is nesesary for the human life. I'll like to propouse a campain about this topic and start to ake conciense in the people because we can save lots of lifes.
The city have being afected because of the drought buecause the plants set fire and theres no water to tur off the fire.
Te acueducto could invent a product who recycle the water of the shower and put into the toilet, and may recycle the rain water to clean the houses, or ration the water.
in clonclution i hope tat te people take more care aboput the water buecause in the future we ain't going to have water and may the world war 3 could be because of the water, beacuse the seas are getting contaminated.
Hello Guys!
ResponderEliminarI can understand the topic that you wanted to present, it was a great idea and the text was so clear. I can relate that I agree with you. The topic that you chose was a big problem in the world and I liked the position that you took. It's better to do your text longer beacuse it was a bit short to express this problems, and to add some links, videos or images to explain the ideas better.
I recommend you to check the words of your text because some of them had spelling problems. But don't worry you can make it better the next time.
Aneth Alvarado Sarmiento