We live in Bogota city, the most important city in Colombia and also the biggest one in this country.
We think it's a great city to live in because the weather it's really cool, every day it's about 19º. In fact, this firts days of 2016 have been so hot like in 25º and also have been raining with hail. There are so much green zones and on Sundays some streets are close to use like a cycleway and everybody go to have fun and do sports. However it have some problems too, like the traffic and insecurity, the bad condition of the streets, the pollution, the differents between some neighborhoods and others; and the worst is the social strata.
The problem that we are worried about it's the environment damage, caused by the people and their garbage, the waste of the water and the electricity and other residues. we will have to work all together to save the planet starting with Colombia and your own city.
Diego Pardo Monje
Elisa Triviño Ramirez
1101 - Sociales
IPN
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