Means of transportation in Bogota
In Bogota city, the transport isn't the best, because a lot of people daily take a bus, a trasmilenio, a SITP and some people who dont have money or help the enviroment travel in bicicle. (by bycicle)
The trasmilenio is the transport most congetionated (most congestionated transport) in Bogota, the administration isn't good, because the people who manages (manage) this, don't take the better decisions. In Bosa the line last a lot of time, and the people are desagree. The taxis and Uber cars/service are really expensive, the buses don't give (offer) you a better service, the drivers don't respect the other drivers, and in "hora pico" the people get out of the jobs and the congestion increases, this cause (this causes) the traffic jam.
But the good point of this are the people who takes bike (use bike/bikes) ,they don't have to worry about traffic jam because don't are (there aren't) much people, but (and) you make exercise.
I think the transport have (has) to change, in (to) a better administration, organization, distributation (distribution) and security.
The security in the transport have (has) a lot of problems, the people make (commit) robery and peek (?), but not everytime the stations have a cop (the stations don't have a cop everytime). . . .
Congestion in "hora pico": https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PbcYyACLgtg
Robery in trasmilenio: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c7OEcg5B5XY
Bike line in bogota: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ar1Tqi1Vgi4
David Rodriguez Torres
Daniel Kassner
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Hi guys, hope you're having a good day.
ResponderEliminarI checked your text and it had some mistakes, so here is my advices:
- Be careful with the conjugation of the words in plural or singular.
- Whenever you use and adjective, remember they always come before the word it is describing.
- It is not necessary to use so many times the article "the". I highlighted with orange those situations when it is useless.
Neverthless, I can say you did a really great job with the coherence and composition of the text. You used the design tools, and those youtube links were a good extra.
nevertheless*
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