Alejandra Montaña
Consumption is the acumulation and purchase of non essential good and services, the mass consumption society directly affects natural resources and ecological balance,
idealizes its effects and consequences with people (?), satisfaction and even people's happiness.
Consumption began in the twentieth century as a result of capitalism, at the emergence of marketing, consumption started fast and has (have) been increasing until really huge levels, cnsumeris is hasmfol (?) to the ecological balance in full and that many of the problems are related to the explotation of natural resourses that are made worwide (around the world) and the production process generate pollution. Lack of knowledge to (from the) people hot knowing (?) their essential needs and are consumed at present some necessary products for living. (?)
The subject you wanted to talk about it's interesting and an actual issue, but there were a lot of mistakes and I couldn't understand some of the sentences. What I recommend:
ResponderEliminar1. Read really carefully when you finish writting to avoid wrong written words.
2. Don't forget the tittle! remember every text needs one.
3. Desing your text with colors, fonts and explore some other tools.